【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。9．（靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬） 年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國(guó)文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會(huì)，會(huì)上我市正式啟動(dòng)了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識(shí)，同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，承擔(dān)起對(duì)市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（以上背景內(nèi)容無需表達(dá)） 內(nèi)容提示： ，幫助他們做家務(wù)活；，排隊(duì)候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書館或博物館），不撒謊，不說臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時(shí)請(qǐng)讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會(huì)越來越美。文中針對(duì)現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述?！军c(diǎn)睛】10．（湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫出1到2條自己的觀點(diǎn)。要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1—3項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 內(nèi)容連貫，表達(dá)通順。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。How to Behave Well_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇演講稿，講我們應(yīng)該如何做才是文明舉止，因此人稱用第一人稱we來寫，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，重點(diǎn)句型及短語：in order to為了，try one39。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。had better not do ，也可用到should等情態(tài)動(dòng)詞或祈使句。11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來自美國(guó)，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實(shí)際用英語回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschool@From: limingsunshineschool@Subject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：?；貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________