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_______________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關于如何響應習主席的號召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。重點語句:It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護環(huán)境是每個人的職責,make full use of充分利用, let’s take action!讓我們行動起來8.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文,內容須包括:讀寄宿學校的利和弊;讀走讀學校的利和弊;你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點內容重復)。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右(文章開頭結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文??梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊;讀走讀學校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮??哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點?!军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9.(北京中考模擬)“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談談你的感受?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從:你努力工作取得了什么成績??你是怎么做到的??你覺得怎么樣?這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系,表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn),因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信,在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?!靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多,就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級,the+比較級”結構。表示“越……,就越……”的意思。10.(黑龍江中考模擬)書面表達假如你是九年級學生李華,你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請你根據(jù)以下信息,給Billy回封電子郵件,并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作要點:1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試(physical test)做準備。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況:(1)每天鍛煉的時間:不到一個半小時。(2)偶爾不鍛煉的原因:作業(yè)多,沒時間。(3)擅長的體育運動:球類運動。3. 談談鍛煉給你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求:1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2. 可適當加入細節(jié),使內容充實,行文連貫。3. 字跡工整,語言精練,表達準確,條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,給Billy回封電子郵件,介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況,并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。【詳解】結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,比如:I am busy……,because I have……,Doing exercise can help……,So I advise you to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系?!军c睛】本文結構緊湊,語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信,接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況,最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達時間過得飛快,似乎幾個月前才進入初三,現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,內容要點如下:1.你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的