【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國(guó)的文化。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時(shí)目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。8．（濟(jì)陽(yáng)縣第二實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：； 。要求：；、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are ing back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also es up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇看圖作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求“； 。”可知，文章用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——描述圖片內(nèi)容。按順序分別描述四幅圖的內(nèi)容：男孩和女孩放學(xué)回家的路上，看到垃圾到處都是，女孩撿起垃圾放到了垃圾桶，男孩畫了一個(gè)標(biāo)志貼到垃圾桶上。注意這一部分用用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第三人稱。第二部分：文章主體——呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境?！鞘惺俏壹?，保護(hù)靠大家。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——做合格的市民。9．（徐州市西苑中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)一日之計(jì)在于晨。同學(xué)們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學(xué)路上，當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來許多好處。請(qǐng)你以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫整潔。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）（A）話題作文：現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來越多，有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全國(guó)愛眼日”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。【答案】It’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述眼睛的重要性以及如何保護(hù)眼睛。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒有必要。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s neces