【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 y, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽(yáng)光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語(yǔ):kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問(wèn)題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)調(diào)查報(bào)告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來(lái)工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥?lái)工作選擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句中的主要是第三人稱(chēng)，句中使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。11．（四川中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請(qǐng)圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€(gè)人建議。原因： 看法與建議：； ，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮； 。 要求： 80100； ； ，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開(kāi)討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，原因已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，有以下幾點(diǎn)： 。寫(xiě)完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容上難度不大，需要把更多精力放在語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語(yǔ)，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣）。第二段對(duì)原因進(jìn)行了闡述，借助了first，second，third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來(lái)。一些短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。最后一段闡明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有創(chuàng)新，用到了一處倒裝句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），強(qiáng)調(diào)了不能作弊，只有以誠(chéng)實(shí)和勤奮的方式我們才能進(jìn)步?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)文章寫(xiě)作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。12．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)86. 上周日下午，你去天津圖書(shū)館讀書(shū)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)寫(xiě)你的經(jīng)歷和感受。1. 在圖書(shū)館二樓，有一個(gè)大約四歲的小男孩，在大聲喧嘩、跑跳；2. 他的媽媽沒(méi)有阻止他，而是在一旁大聲接打電話；3. 你走過(guò)去，告訴他這樣做是不對(duì)的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。4. 對(duì)此現(xiàn)象，你的感受和想法……參考詞匯： some uncivilized phenomena一些不文明現(xiàn)象1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80100個(gè)；2. 開(kāi)頭字?jǐn)?shù)已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)；3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________