【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 y, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫一篇英語調(diào)查報告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓ξ磥砉ぷ鞯倪x擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥砉ぷ鬟x擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。11．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€人建議。原因： 看法與建議：； ，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮； 。 要求： 80100； ； ，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開寫作，原因已經(jīng)給出來了，有以下幾點(diǎn)： 。寫完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。寫作內(nèi)容上難度不大，需要把更多精力放在語言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個壞習(xí)慣）。第二段對原因進(jìn)行了闡述，借助了first，second，third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來。一些短語運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。最后一段闡明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有創(chuàng)新，用到了一處倒裝句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），強(qiáng)調(diào)了不能作弊，只有以誠實(shí)和勤奮的方式我們才能進(jìn)步。總體來說文章寫作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。12．（天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)86. 上周日下午，你去天津圖書館讀書，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象。請根據(jù)以下提示點(diǎn)，寫寫你的經(jīng)歷和感受。1. 在圖書館二樓，有一個大約四歲的小男孩，在大聲喧嘩、跑跳；2. 他的媽媽沒有阻止他，而是在一旁大聲接打電話；3. 你走過去，告訴他這樣做是不對的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。4. 對此現(xiàn)象，你的感受和想法……參考詞匯： some uncivilized phenomena一些不文明現(xiàn)象1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80100個；2. 開頭字?jǐn)?shù)已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)；3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________