【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 __________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開。”我們大多數(shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開。”我們大多數(shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍疚挠靡话氵^去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過去時(shí)，注意動詞的過去式變形。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是吳浩，你的父母打算春節(jié)期間帶你和妹妹去北京。你們準(zhǔn)備坐飛機(jī)去，請你給旅行社寫封電子郵件，咨詢有關(guān)航班，酒店和旅游景點(diǎn)的情況。留下你的電話，以便旅行社和你聯(lián)系。Dear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Wu Hao【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes!Wu Hao【解析】【詳解】本文屬于應(yīng)用文體，向旅行社詢問去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。11．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)（湖南衡陽）榮光學(xué)校九年級（2）班就“環(huán)境問題”召開了一次班會，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”為題進(jìn)行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學(xué)對未來有些擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文。樂觀者的觀點(diǎn)。擔(dān)心者的觀點(diǎn)。你的觀點(diǎn)及你的打算學(xué)生自擬（至少兩點(diǎn)）提示：。、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.參考詞匯：optimistic government 　　take measures to采取措施　private Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. 【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there