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ated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點并進行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫贊同學生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點,第二段要寫反對學生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點,第三段要表述作者自己的觀點?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見,寫作之前要認真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢。可以適當發(fā)揮,寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對;你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9.(江蘇中考模擬) 為提升南京城市形象,我市已啟動老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim,請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示,用英文向你的外國筆友 Jack 做簡單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3 詞數(shù) 80 左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達是描述老社區(qū)改造工程,話題較新。【詳解】這是篇材料作文,所給的內(nèi)容要點給的比較零碎,不完整,所以考生需要結(jié)合實際情況補充完整,是文章內(nèi)容充實。在寫作時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。10.(四川中考模擬) 書面表達在你的成長過程中,許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你,讓你感動、伴你成長。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。要求: 1. 寫出要感謝的對象、原因及感激語言;,語意通順、連貫。,書寫工整、規(guī)范。、校名和地名。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達意,完整,語法正確,合乎習慣,特別是句式,謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù),選用比較有把握的詞匯,用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。11.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達無錫被評為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對此進行了一次班級討論,請你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息,以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿,號召廣大學生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻。內(nèi)容提示如下:1.政府修建了很多新路、大橋,甚至還有地鐵;2.新添了很多露天開放公園,每到周末和節(jié)假日,人們常常去那里野餐,游玩;3.私家車越來越多,停車已成了大問題;4.城市變化有利有弊;5.你的希望:……注