【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ed as the most beautiful marathon course.I think the people in Wuhan likes the of them want to take part in it.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，給他介紹關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)。其中第五條需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)的個(gè)人想法，這一部分是不受限制的，學(xué)生們可以自由發(fā)揮，但需要注意內(nèi)容需要與全文大意連貫起來(lái)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運(yùn)用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯題目中的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個(gè)高級(jí)句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫(xiě)電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并對(duì)信息進(jìn)行加工、處理和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加清楚、連貫。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，個(gè)別句子使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。文章句式以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，穿插使用了復(fù)雜句式，如賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the 。7．（四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。提示：1. 現(xiàn)在存在的環(huán)境問(wèn)題。2. 采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。3） 使用購(gòu)物袋代替塑料袋, 盡量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用廢品等。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入字?jǐn)?shù)。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)前，我市各學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展“好書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)活動(dòng)主題并結(jié)合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80個(gè)單詞的倡議書(shū)，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書(shū)的益處獲取知識(shí)、開(kāi)闊視野、使人快樂(lè) 存在的現(xiàn)象聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間發(fā)出倡議多讀書(shū)，讀經(jīng)典好書(shū)。讓讀書(shū)成為我們生活的一部分。要求：；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（湖南中考模擬）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書(shū)。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。倡議書(shū)的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest