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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想,正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。5.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下:1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途;2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議(至少 3 點(diǎn));3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢,把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱,寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?!军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語(yǔ)俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號(hào)召。內(nèi)容包括:應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。提示詞語(yǔ):story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books a