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n an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),寫作要點(diǎn)要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請(qǐng)你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。參考詞匯: 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文,要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn),首先要研究表格,找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn),然后加以整合,也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫,但要點(diǎn)一定要全,不能漏掉。寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語的影響,要用地道的英語表達(dá),注意時(shí)態(tài),語態(tài),單詞拼寫,語法等問題,用好簡單句,適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句??梢杂靡恍└呒?jí)詞匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。7.共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示,給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)隨處可見,出行方便有益健康,減少污染費(fèi)用不高,負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題未及時(shí)歸還占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為參考詞匯:公共自行車public bicycles注意事項(xiàng):,要求語句通順,意思連貫。“你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用23句話展開合理想象,做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Pu