【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬）初級(jí)寫作今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等，而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請(qǐng)以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫一篇短文。提示：存在問題：；；； .要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少34個(gè)方面，80100詞?！敬鸢浮縏he environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People39。s health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it39。s time for us to protect our world． Firstly，we shouldn39。t throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don39。t use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：先仔細(xì)審題，這是寫好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來，一定要確定好文章的重點(diǎn)，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短語和句式，增加文章的色彩．本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious ，指出環(huán)境問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重，然后按照題目要求逐一列出現(xiàn)在所存在的問題。提出問題之后接著提出解決問題的辦法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到內(nèi)容完整，思路清晰，詞語運(yùn)用正確，是一篇很不錯(cuò)的文章。9．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中生活即將結(jié)束。在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事，請(qǐng)以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。講述一個(gè)你最難忘的人或事。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。,短文連貫通順，80詞左右?！敬鸢浮緼n unforgettable teacher in my school lifeFor these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。【詳解】，確定寫作的目標(biāo)，寫自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事，描述難忘的人用第三人稱，講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時(shí)，開頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書寫時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”，敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了，注意短語、句型的正確使用。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，緊扣主題，前呼后應(yīng)。：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合；短語how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語言增色不少。10．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力，這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正開辟專欄討論中學(xué)生如何減壓。假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語寫出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。；；；。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,39。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過的家務(wù)活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務(wù)活和不喜歡做的家務(wù)活，并談?wù)勀阕黾覄?wù)的感受。提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，語意連貫，書寫工整；、校名等；，開頭給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。同時(shí)I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12．（山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。為幫助中小學(xué)生了解國情、熱愛祖國、開闊眼界、增長知識(shí),提高社會(huì)責(zé)任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實(shí)踐能力,教育部倡導(dǎo)開展“研學(xué)旅行 （study tour）”活動(dòng)。你校也計(jì)劃開展此項(xiàng)活動(dòng),但是有些學(xué)生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄f明理由。要求,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。、校名:80100（文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。可參考以下詞匯the sense of social responsibility社會(huì)責(zé)任感。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。 practical ability實(shí)踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents