【正文】 期六這一天，你與幾位同班同學(xué)一起參觀了水上公園 （Water Park）。（1），游客多；（2）上午劃船，下午看了許多動(dòng)物，例如…：（3）碰到幾位外國(guó)朋友并與他們交談：（4）看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊(duì)等不良現(xiàn)象：（5）你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊(duì)cut in line要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，做到語(yǔ)意連貫。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。另外為了應(yīng)對(duì)考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。北京中考模擬）題目②“持之以恒，方得始。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問(wèn)題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39?！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)?！芭懿健保牟糠衷敿?xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過(guò)克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。 ”7．（同學(xué)們，從小到大，會(huì)有很多不同的人物伴隨著你成長(zhǎng)，他們可能是你的家人、老師、朋友、同學(xué)……甚至是路人。請(qǐng)以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤(rùn)色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬）初級(jí)寫作今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等，而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請(qǐng)以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫一篇短文?！敬鸢浮縏he environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People39。s time for us to protect our world． Firstly，we shouldn39。t use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：先仔細(xì)審題，這是寫好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)，一定要確定好文章的重點(diǎn)，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加文章的色彩．本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious ，指出環(huán)境問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，然后按照題目要求逐一列出現(xiàn)在所存在的問(wèn)題。9．（在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事，請(qǐng)以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school lifeFor these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。，開(kāi)頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合；短語(yǔ)how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語(yǔ)言增色不少。重慶中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力，這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。11．（提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，語(yǔ)意連貫，書(shū)寫工整；、校名等；，開(kāi)頭給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。同時(shí)I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語(yǔ)從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū),行萬(wàn)里路。你校也計(jì)劃開(kāi)展此項(xiàng)活動(dòng),但是有些學(xué)生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對(duì)。要求,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫?？蓞⒖家韵略~匯the sense of social responsibility社會(huì)責(zé)任感。 practical ability實(shí)踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours fors