【正文】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。5．（要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。北京中考模擬） 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W(xué)生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。7．（請根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don39。s rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hat you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風(fēng)景，而是無數(shù)晃動的頭?！靖叻志湫投縄n my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看來，旅行時，人們不僅要注意安全，還要注意衛(wèi)生，不要到處亂扔垃圾。8．（ 寫作要點： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時間喜歡聽音樂。 寫作要求： 。 、語言精練、表達準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時間喜歡做的活動以及運動的好處。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。山東中考模擬）緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊成長記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。首句已給出。，信件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。題目中并沒有給出具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進行詳細闡述。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛好、特長等方面進行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對未來的希望。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時；第二段回憶過去的生活，主要使用了一般過去時；最后對未來提出希望，用到了一般將來時。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。10．（根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。，司機撥打120求助。事故原因女孩騎車時闖紅燈，因此她對事故負有責(zé)任。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。重點詞匯短語：traffic accident交通事故；across the road過馬路；suddenly突然地；At the same time同時；fell down摔倒；send sb to Sp把某人送到某地；make an examination檢查； be responsible for sth. 對……負責(zé)；pay attention to注意；fortunately幸運地。關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。try to do sth努力做某事。狀語從句。四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. 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