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jects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。陜西中考模擬) 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);: 不少于70詞(開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文。7.(“開心的是暑假如期而至;盼望的是我們獨(dú)自旅行;煩惱的是父母不予支持。同為青少年的你覺得在沒有父母的陪伴下出游可行嗎?請你按要求寫一篇英語作文。要求:1. 詞數(shù)80120詞,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱?!驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三部分:第一部分:闡明論點(diǎn)。第二部分:主體部分。第三部分:再次重申論點(diǎn)。廣東實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬)書面表達(dá)農(nóng)歷五月初五,我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動(dòng),請你邀請外國友人Amy來校參加。內(nèi)容包括:時(shí)間:農(nóng)歷五月初五地點(diǎn):學(xué)校操場目的:深入了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容:文化展覽歷史介紹:兩千多年,紀(jì)念屈原體驗(yàn)民間活動(dòng):賽龍舟,包粽子活動(dòng)意義:1.2.參考詞匯:農(nóng)歷:Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如learn from,want to know something,the Chinese traditional festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,share with,more than 2000 years,according to,a kind of,in memory of,In a word,look back on history,get together with family,in the near future等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。9.(某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文,請用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文,將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I39。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。廣東中考模擬)近來,野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。提示:1. 遵守動(dòng)物園的各項(xiàng)規(guī)定;2. 參觀時(shí)不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng);3. 時(shí)刻提醒自己安全第一;4. 遇到危險(xiǎn)及時(shí)求助。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visit