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possible, and you can be a good learner.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如have problem doing,be poor at,make you feel confident,some other students,the best way,listen to,at the same time,help sb. do,as much as possible等。而三句As a…的運用,使短文很有條理,是本文的最大亮點?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。山東中考模擬)書面表達根據(jù)所給圖畫,用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。提示詞:plate 盤子, trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆, color 給…上色, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, Why not turn them into paintings? Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文,要求根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個故事。此外,picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。切忌堆砌詞語和句子,注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢。上海中考模擬)In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.(以“我和……” 為題,寫一篇60120 個詞的短文,標點符號不占格。請分享一個你和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事,并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗或感受。)【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事,并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗或感受。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。8.(請你根據(jù)所列提示問題談?wù)勀銓@個活動的認識,用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿。At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. 【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter es, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞,從我做起”主題教育活動,談?wù)勛约旱目捶?;英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài),注意提供的觀點、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的;make great progress 取得巨大進步9.(請以“Travelling”為題,根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示,寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表你的看法。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。全國中考模擬)書面表達越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時也帶來了很多問題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,讓短文通順,過渡自然。Traffic safety is everybody39。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39?!窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文,寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做,結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:we are happy that……,it has also brought…….,Traffic safety is……,we must……,we can……,等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題,接下來介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則,最后指出人人認為交通安全是自己的事,我們才能在路上安全行駛。11.(假設(shè)你班對此進行了一次班級討論,請你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息,以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿,號召廣大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)90左右,發(fā)言稿的開頭已在答題卡上給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4.發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。s being difficult to park cars.The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages.I hope the government can deal with the problem.Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。而More and more people have their own cars and it39。點睛:這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用現(xiàn)在完成時和一般現(xiàn)在時,可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實際展開合理的想象,把它們拓展成一個個英文句子。12.(然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展,國民尤其是青少年對網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷,使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。提示:。 ②在班級建立圖書角。 ④計劃閱讀時間及閱讀量。(2)字跡工整,語言流暢,表達準確,邏輯清晰。How to Have Reading Activities_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________