【正文】 of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫(xiě)贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn)，第二段要寫(xiě)反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn)，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。6．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問(wèn)題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39?！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q(chēng)寫(xiě)初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫(xiě)“What did you do?用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫(xiě)How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。“跑步”，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫(xiě)了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過(guò)克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。 ”7．書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書(shū)籍。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂(lè)部的活動(dòng)情況，并說(shuō)說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)的好處。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂(lè)部成員們一起讀英文書(shū)。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書(shū)。寫(xiě)作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。8．現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)（smartphone）越來(lái)越普及，很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。提示：在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么？智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法？_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________