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。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。美好的回憶; ;; 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校;2. 能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友;3. 請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充(至少兩點(diǎn))My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài),并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。表格中有非常具體的提示,但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ),應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話,并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達(dá)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ),如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目。注意 :。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面:首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來,還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實(shí);最后寫一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾,如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同,不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主,簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述