【文章內容簡介】 構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。語言準確、得體，表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。5．（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應該包含以下要點:1,學生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。6．近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關報道之后也很想學好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內容應包括以下幾個方面：首先應和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達出來，還應注意補充一些內容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當?shù)慕Y尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結構考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結構或主系表結構為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結構符合英語的表達習慣。語法規(guī)范、準確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結構為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整了文章的結構。文章中使用了較為豐富