【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、初中英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1．One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering解析：One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?lái)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。因此寫作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語(yǔ)等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了過(guò)去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。2．HappinessDad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom co解析：HappinessDad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom es back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would e soon so that the whole family can get together!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。3．The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If解析：The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰(shuí)是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書寫無(wú)誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語(yǔ)，較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。4．With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lif解析：With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采?？赡苡玫降脑~組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。5．In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activitie解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇演講稿，講我們應(yīng)該如何做才是文明舉止，因此人稱用第一人稱we來(lái)寫，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，重點(diǎn)句型及短語(yǔ)：in order to為了，try one39。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。had better not do ，也可用到should等情態(tài)動(dòng)詞或祈使句。6．Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northe解析：Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d be