【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q，談?wù)勛约簩δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎?，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時(shí)要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運(yùn)動(dòng)方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。9．（徐州市西苑中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)一日之計(jì)在于晨。同學(xué)們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學(xué)路上，當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來許多好處。請你以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫整潔。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（哈爾濱市第四十七中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是麗麗，還有不到100天就要中考了，今天為了讓我你們在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)之余得到放松，你們班召開了一個(gè)主題為業(yè)余時(shí)間你最喜歡做什么的討論，請你根據(jù)所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇日記，并談一下業(yè)余時(shí)間做運(yùn)動(dòng)對你的好處。 寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 2. 討論的結(jié)果。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡聽音樂。 （2）百分之三十的學(xué)生喜歡業(yè)余時(shí)間打電腦游戲（3） 你和一些同學(xué)喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)。 寫作要求： 。 2. 可適當(dāng)加人細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。 、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡做的活動(dòng)以及運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. Looking back, we must have our special thanks to someone, or something we feel regretful, or some moments which are unforgettable. Please use “The last moment of junior life “as the title to write an article which should be about 120 words. The following aspects should be mentioned:1. Your general feeling of your junior school life.2. Your special thanks to someone and describe the reasons. （at least two reasons）3. Describe the most unforgettable thing in your junior school in detail. （when, where, who, wh