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及讀書的意義。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,寫出對學生的倡議。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述倡議時,描寫細致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。6.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國家主席習近平多次強調(diào)良好家風家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況,給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介紹一下你的家規(guī),并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。要點提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實守信,不斷學習按時作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強邏輯關系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。