【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _____________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語(yǔ)、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning 。【點(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分四段寫：總體簡(jiǎn)單描述話題；贊成；反對(duì)；你的看法。注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。8．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)下面的圖片描述了昨天下午發(fā)生在四年級(jí)三班教室里的情景。小林和小剛之間的對(duì)話，讓你 想到了什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖片的理解，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 完整描述圖片內(nèi)容； 2. 簡(jiǎn)要闡述你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。 寫作要求：1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 提示詞： 手提電腦 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to pare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，是一篇看圖作文。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景，弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思，然后用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括兩個(gè)部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對(duì)該事情闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，第三人稱來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合圖片表達(dá)的意思，不能會(huì)錯(cuò)意，寫偏、寫錯(cuò)；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實(shí)、完整。其次要注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。用從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文水平，應(yīng)注意應(yīng)用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞郑刮囊膺B貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對(duì)這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，作者通過(guò)觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達(dá)的信息，確定了文章的中心。文章內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述清晰、有層次。作者觀點(diǎn)明確，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱來(lái)敘述，正確使用了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式，注意了過(guò)去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交替應(yīng)用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。9．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語(yǔ)的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ) proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個(gè)是“患難見(jiàn)真情”，第二個(gè)是“有志者事競(jìng)成”?！驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語(yǔ)的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體10．（安徽中考模擬）近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistake