【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 give up, such as等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。7．（廣東中考模擬）近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不 敢去學校，甚至會出現(xiàn)心理問題等嚴重后果。 請以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫一篇英語短文，談談你的看法。提示：1. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所給提示信息應全部包括，可適當發(fā)揮，以 使行文連貫；2. 80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談你對校園欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（天津中考模擬） 最近一份學生體質健康調查結果顯示，學生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。現(xiàn) 狀大約70%學生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習慣你的觀點… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進行體育活動（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個人觀點：如：我認為，我們應該了解保護眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（河北中考模擬）請以“Never Give Up”為題,寫一篇短文,簡要描述圖中的三個畫面,并談談自己的想法?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個詞左右,已給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some_____________________