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ing party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動,并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導非限制性定語從句。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6.書面表達 我校決定讓學生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學生的一種方式。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響,請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報告給學校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學生是獨生子女,不會做事。 2.學生應(yīng)該學會做艱苦的工作。 3.學會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學生生病。 2.不是學生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點詞匯及短語:argument爭論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會;help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來,在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論?,F(xiàn)在完成時(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。動詞不定式作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù),疑問詞+to do。7.為了吸引外國游客,杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對杭州茶文化進行宣傳。請你根據(jù)表格信息,用英語為其寫一篇介紹,詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________