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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應用,比如:People celebrate……,People hold……,We can watch……,We wele to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間,接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?;顒?,最后歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。6.書面表達每年的4月23日是世界讀書日,這個紀念日的意義在于推動更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開展“讀好書,促成長”活動,請你根據(jù)這項活動的主題,向全校同學發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義 1. 獲取知識,開闊視野 2. 使人愉悅,益于學習 3. ……(自由發(fā)揮)現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多,無良好讀書習慣 2. 不知道讀什么書,不會選擇倡議 ……(至少兩點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful. However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. In my opinion,our school can have aReading Weekonce a term.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。7.書面表達以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。要求:?!敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the yo