【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 （4）你認(rèn)為……。My name is Susan. There are many rules in my 【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，針對父母對你要求過多你感到厭煩這一問題，你是如何解決的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（湖南中考模擬）人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由反對的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙（be cheated）1. ...2. ...注意：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn)，第二段要寫反對學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn)，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢?？梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系，要符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9．（江蘇中考模擬） 近年來，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生開始使用手機(jī)來完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報Teens 將在下期開設(shè)專欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反對者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說英語。自從使用手機(jī)以來，視力變差。一個理由……（12句）一個理由……（12句）你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎？給出你的理由……（23句），要求語句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；，寫在試卷其他部位無效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類的作文，那么在寫這類作文時，首先要分別寫出支持和反對兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學(xué)；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is adj. for us to do sth對某人來說，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a