【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（山東中考模擬） 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（湖南中考模擬） 閱讀可以使人開闊視野，閱讀可使人心曠神怡，不管是參加中國漢字聽寫大會，還是中國詩詞大會，都需要有良好的閱讀基礎(chǔ)。下面請大家談?wù)勯喿x的好處并在生活中養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。注意：作文字?jǐn)?shù)，不低于60字.參考詞匯：increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorfulReading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without going out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful. Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)是根據(jù)提示介紹讀書的好處及養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。文章的時態(tài)以寫作時為主。寫作時注意firstly，secondly，thirdly，F(xiàn)inally的使用。開篇點題，分析讀書的好處。最后發(fā)出呼吁讓人們讀書。10．（江蘇泰州中學(xué)附屬初中中考模擬）請根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。外貌 圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機(jī)靈。特點1. 禮貌的女孩，誠實；我信任她，真正的朋友，因為……。當(dāng)我憂傷時，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細(xì)傾聽我的問題，……。2．有幽默感，擅長講滑稽的笑話；和她在一起，我很少感到……。3. 喜歡DIY，……3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時總有耐心，長大后……。 I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.【答案】My good friendI would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)時間過得飛快，似乎幾個月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間來進(jìn)行課外活動；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Sen