【正文】 太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你校正開展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動，請你結合生活實際寫一封英語小短文介紹有關情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網絡。短文內容包括以下幾個方面：網絡使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網絡的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實的個人信息，不單獨和net friend見面，使用文明語言，等等。希望……要求：詞數不少于100。 信中須包括所有內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現真實的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網絡的方式。寫作中學生需要緊密貼合題干中已經給出的要點：網絡使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網絡的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實的個人信息，不單獨和網友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學生可以在這個基礎上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實用的祈使句結構。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點：這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網絡使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結尾提出了倡議，結構完整，段落清晰。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。Dear John,向你求助。請根據郵件內容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國家庭生活應注意的事項。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭告訴他不必擔心，接下來回答他的問題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當提出一點你的建議。注意：1．詞數80—100；2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達歡迎和你的擔憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達的要點和細節(jié)。本文的寫作要點：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當提出一點你的建議。18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革，經過一段時間的適應，同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談談你的感受和想法，開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞數）。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselv