【正文】 太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你校正開展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合生活實(shí)際寫一封英語小短文介紹有關(guān)情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)。短文內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和net friend見面，使用文明語言，等等。希望……要求：詞數(shù)不少于100。 信中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實(shí)用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國家庭生活應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭告訴他不必?fù)?dān)心，接下來回答他的問題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你叫John，最近從報(bào)紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對(duì)英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕ǎ_頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselv