【正文】 made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。15．（山西中考模擬）書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。學會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請結合自身的一次經歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現真實的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮縄t39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結合自身的一次經歷，闡述分享的意義。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級+名詞復數，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。16．（寧夏中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，作為交換生你去年在美國學習了一學期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學期里，你和他及他的家人結下了深厚的友誼。請你根據下面的提示寫一篇日記。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語學習方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國菜。4. ……（自由發(fā)揮，至少談及兩項內容）；5. 希望他和他的家人能來中國。注意：1．詞數80左右；2．合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday May 27th, Sunny_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will e to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己為交換生你去年在美國學習了一學期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學期里，你和他及他的家人結下了深厚的友誼。請你根據下面的提示寫一篇日記。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達保護環(huán)境是每一個人的責任。假設下面是你閱讀了有關環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請根據表格內所給內容寫一篇短文。過去現在 ，并回收利用 你認為作為中學生應該如何做才能保護好環(huán)境?（至少兩點）要求：，意思連貫。，做適當發(fā)揮。，不計入總同數。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護環(huán)境是我們的職責，我閱讀了關于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化，接下來介紹我過去和現在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學生我們應如何保護環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談談你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________