【正文】 made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。15．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。學(xué)會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。【答案】It39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（寧夏中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，作為交換生你去年在美國學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國菜。4. ……（自由發(fā)揮，至少談及兩項內(nèi)容）；5. 希望他和他的家人能來中國。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday May 27th, Sunny_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will e to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己為交換生你去年在美國學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)保護(hù)環(huán)境是每一個人的責(zé)任。假設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。過去現(xiàn)在 ，并回收利用 你認(rèn)為作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護(hù)好環(huán)境?（至少兩點）要求：，意思連貫。，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，不計入總同數(shù)。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化，接下來介紹我過去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________