【正文】 ，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76. 連云港開展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營(yíng)造一種“多讀書，讀好書”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形?。注意?. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我讀過的一本好書的名字，接下來介紹我讀這本書的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教師，在他回國(guó)前夕，學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇?dú)g送辭，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人，三年前來到我校教英語；2. 他與我們相處融洽，但對(duì)我們要求嚴(yán)格；3. 這些年來，…… 我們深表感激；4. 下星期他將離校回國(guó)，祝他一路順風(fēng)。【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（湖南長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76,近年來，科技的進(jìn)步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國(guó)青年評(píng)選出了中國(guó)的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購(gòu)。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國(guó)的一名初中生，她對(duì)我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學(xué)生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。19．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。要求；，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：it39。s very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了作為中學(xué)生，獨(dú)立很重要，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力，最后指出不要總是依靠其他人。此處begin with, make one’s bed, help with, look after, on time, need to do sth, depend on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。20．（江蘇中考模擬） 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國(guó)青少年近視率居世界第一。年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。以下表格是學(xué)校針對(duì)本校學(xué)生近視問題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。我校學(xué)生的近視問題調(diào)查情況60%的本