【正文】 others must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們只要用英語(yǔ)正確的把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)就行。動(dòng)筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關(guān)系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認(rèn)為他們的學(xué)?？梢蚤_(kāi)班會(huì)，幫助他們認(rèn)識(shí)到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動(dòng)詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，學(xué)校應(yīng)該定期舉辦有益的校外活動(dòng)。此句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。其構(gòu)成為：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學(xué)校緊密合作是家長(zhǎng)幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動(dòng)名詞Working closely with schools作主語(yǔ)，視作單數(shù)，因此be動(dòng)詞用is。14．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情，寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。16．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，網(wǎng)購(gòu)已成為流行趨勢(shì)，二網(wǎng)購(gòu)的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點(diǎn)些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。，可以在家買東西，不受時(shí)間限制。，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨](méi)有的商品。價(jià)格較便宜。；實(shí)物和圖片有差距。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來(lái)描述優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再用一段描述劣勢(shì)和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會(huì)條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在陳述的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。寫作亮點(diǎn)：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開(kāi)始描述優(yōu)勢(shì)，這里用到了“無(wú)論什么時(shí)候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達(dá)“...是開(kāi)放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”。比較級(jí)的應(yīng)用也相對(duì)準(zhǔn)確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點(diǎn)，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢(shì)的時(shí)候引用了俗語(yǔ)“Every coin has two sides.”，是個(gè)亮點(diǎn)?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語(yǔ)言的多樣性?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)要點(diǎn)均被提及，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確富有活力。17．（河北中考模擬）為了讓同學(xué)們認(rèn)識(shí)到安全的重