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l make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。9.近年來,習近平主席提出了實現中華民族偉大復興的“中國夢”。學校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,請根據以下提供的要點,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。(可聯系實際,適當發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。提示詞語: good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning, dear teachers and friends, I am Zhang Ming. It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。d like to help people. For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word, I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,要求根據圖表提示內容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現在時,人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作過程中,要將圖表內提示信息用英語正確的表達出來,要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點,注意理順要點,防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。10. 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是誰?你是怎么看待你們的友誼的?請以“My Best Friend ”為題,根據以下提示寫一篇英語短文。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數801003. 文中不得出現真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個提綱作文。題目給出了標題及寫作要點。根據題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時態(tài)為一般現在時和一般過去時。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結構,注意主謂一致關系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時態(tài)。另外在寫作時可以適當使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯?!军c睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒?。時態(tài)為一般現在時態(tài)。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當主語是第三人稱單數時,注意主謂一致關系。