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ieve that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,要求根據(jù)圖表提示內容,以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作過程中,要將圖表內提示信息用英語正確的表達出來,要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點,注意理順要點,防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。9.請根據(jù)表格內Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel(爭吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求:語言要通順,表達要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。文章開頭結尾已給出,不計入詞數(shù)?!敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知,本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),第三人稱進行敘述,寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點,做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞?!玖咙c說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高興做某事;a lot of許多;get up起床等。本文中時間詞如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起來邏輯清楚,條理分明。在學習中,我們應注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點:考查提綱類作文10.書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報“英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信,說說你的計劃?;顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學生和老師活動內容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結尾己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。