【正文】 ieve that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開(kāi)展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái)，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。9．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭(zhēng)吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語(yǔ)言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫(xiě)作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行敘述，寫(xiě)作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫(xiě)作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文10．書(shū)面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫(xiě)一封信，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的計(jì)劃。活動(dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。 ，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。