【正文】 c bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。為使?jié)鲜腥脒x全國文明城市，鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟(jì)南，濟(jì)南市團(tuán)委開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。要求根據(jù)所給出的提示，寫一篇短文。根據(jù)所給材料可知時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱。本文給出的材料比較具體全面，考生需要用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)想象發(fā)揮。寫作中注意理順要點，防止漏寫，注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。點睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。18．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面面俱到，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，人稱為第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內(nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情，所以時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。【高分句型一】I did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動名詞?！靖叻志湫投緼s we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運用，為文章增添了色彩。19．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點，請參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。價格較便宜。；實物和圖片有差距。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達(dá)“...是開放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”。比較級的應(yīng)用也相對準(zhǔn)確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個亮點?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性。總體來說要點均被提及，語言準(zhǔn)確富有活力。20．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是吳浩，你的父母打算春節(jié)期間帶你和妹妹去北京。你們準(zhǔn)備坐飛機(jī)去，請你給旅行社寫封電子郵件，咨詢有關(guān)航班，酒店和旅游景點的情況。留下你的電話，以便旅行社和你聯(lián)系。Dear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Wu Hao【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes!Wu Hao【解析】【詳解】本文屬于應(yīng)用文體，向旅行社詢問去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景點。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用