【正文】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. When I was on the second floor, I found some uncivilized phenomena. I saw a boy who was about 4 years old shouting and running noisily. He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. What should I do then? I walked towards the little boy and told him that it was wrong to do so. The boy said “sorry” and went back to his seat quietly.In my point of view, this mother set a bad example for her child. It is important for her to tell his son some public rules. As long as everyone follows these rules, all of us will be in a civilized society.【解析】【詳解】上周日下午，你去天津圖書(shū)館讀書(shū)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)寫(xiě)你的經(jīng)歷和感受。這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，：He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. 學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.14．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace （白金漢宮） visit the British Museum （大英博物館）watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast （黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求：1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括某一國(guó)家的所有信息及選擇的理由； 2. 結(jié)合游玩國(guó)家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動(dòng)，并提出12點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng)；3. 文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 語(yǔ)義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。15．（全國(guó)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車(chē)進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如塞車(chē)和車(chē)禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn)。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。勸父母不能酒后駕車(chē)。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線(xiàn)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（廣東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀(guān)故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個(gè)大概的介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫(xiě)作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well