【正文】 nal food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（河南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)近幾年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。直接影響著中國(guó)“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫(xiě)一則英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā? 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場(chǎng)所喧嘩，購(gòu)物時(shí)排隊(duì)。 3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇寫(xiě)作需要圍繞“如何做一個(gè)合格的游客”展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，具體的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來(lái)表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭胛恼?，銜接好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：開(kāi)頭應(yīng)該對(duì)寫(xiě)作的背景進(jìn)行一定的交代?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對(duì)中國(guó)的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時(shí)態(tài)的妙用是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。緊接著發(fā)問(wèn)引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點(diǎn)。相關(guān)短語(yǔ)使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡(jiǎn)練的收尾，we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會(huì)為我們自己和我們的國(guó)家贏得尊重），簡(jiǎn)練，完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。16．（南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，中考后就會(huì)迎來(lái)漫長(zhǎng)的暑假了，班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書(shū)；學(xué)習(xí)技能 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）生活健康飲食；堅(jiān)持鍛煉 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）其它熱愛(ài)公益；親近自然 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如I39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是