【正文】 you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。14．（全國(guó)中考模擬）每位同學(xué)都希望成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。?duì)待集體積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng), 注重細(xì)節(jié),工作高標(biāo)準(zhǔn),……對(duì)待他人尊重老師、與同學(xué)相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對(duì)待自己嚴(yán)于律已，努力學(xué)習(xí)，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)有沒(méi)有那么一件事是你一直想做的，但又因?yàn)榉N種原因遲遲未付諸行動(dòng)？也許是被擱置的新年愿望，或許是對(duì)父母的一句“我愛(ài)你”，抑或是一直沒(méi)有動(dòng)身前往的地方？請(qǐng)將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文。詞數(shù)：不少于100詞。要點(diǎn)：1. 寫一件讓你心心念念的事；2. 談?wù)勀阋恢毕胱鲞@件事，但沒(méi)能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因；3. 談?wù)勀阆乱徊降挠?jì)劃。注意: ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名等相關(guān)信息?！敬鸢浮縄t’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任務(wù)） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （嘆息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想長(zhǎng)大了去海南看美麗的風(fēng)景，接下來(lái)介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒(méi)能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計(jì)劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）某英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?. 積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)2. 及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘過(guò)重的壓力1. 無(wú)法入睡，非常疲憊2. 害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗應(yīng)對(duì)的措施1. 合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分2. ……注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to deal with the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we hav