【正文】 （英語）中考英語易錯(cuò)題專題三英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編(含解析)一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。英國(guó)懷特學(xué)校下學(xué)期組織學(xué)生來你校學(xué)習(xí)了解中國(guó)文化，請(qǐng)你以李明的身份給該校校長(zhǎng)Mr. Green寫一封郵件，介紹你校的相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排及其理由。要求：1. 介紹不少于兩個(gè)有關(guān)中國(guó)文化的活動(dòng)及安排理由；2. 詞數(shù)：80－120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考要點(diǎn)：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運(yùn)……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國(guó)懷特學(xué)校的校長(zhǎng)Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個(gè)方面：首先介紹不少于兩個(gè)關(guān)于中國(guó)文化的活動(dòng)，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動(dòng)的理由。根據(jù)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)充實(shí)寫作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。整篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達(dá)以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對(duì)懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學(xué)校的活動(dòng)安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動(dòng)的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達(dá)了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫。2．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球?，F(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電；2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護(hù)森林；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹；4. 不亂丟雜物，保護(hù)環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．（北京中考模擬）題目②“持之以恒，方得始。”堅(jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí)，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題，文句通順。“跑步”，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”4．（甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。作為一名中學(xué)生．假如你夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一名發(fā)明家，應(yīng)該怎樣做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漫畫提示，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（文章標(biāo)題和開頭已給出不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)） 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I