【正文】 lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。15．（上海中考模擬）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇60120 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。） 每一個(gè)生命個(gè)體都和這個(gè)世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系，你也不例外。請(qǐng)分享一個(gè)你和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。16．（廣東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個(gè)大概的介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫(xiě)作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點(diǎn)比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達(dá)方式是否恰當(dāng)，所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫(xiě)等方面是否有誤等。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)76. 連云港開(kāi)展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營(yíng)造一種“多讀書(shū)，讀好書(shū)”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書(shū)（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形?。注意?. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書(shū)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我讀過(guò)的一本好書(shū)的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我讀這本書(shū)的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書(shū)的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書(shū)。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。18．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)務(wù)必將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置！父母為我們付出了很多，你又做過(guò)哪些事情來(lái)表達(dá)自己的感恩之情呢？請(qǐng)敘述你為父母做過(guò)的一件事，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要? 1. 條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范整潔，100個(gè)詞左右。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及姓名?！敬鸢浮縏here’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do thin