【正文】 is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化。而三句As a…的運用，使短文很有條理，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。14．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。西安作為一座古老的城市在創(chuàng)建國際化大都市的過程中，離不開精神文明建設(shè)。在你身邊有哪些不文明現(xiàn)象？作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面做起，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力？請根據(jù)提示詞，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題，號召全體中學(xué)生共創(chuàng)美好西安。提示詞：spit 吐痰； respect。 traffic rules。 volunteer。 collect the trash。 plant trees。 clean the streets。 an environmental project….要求：1. 不少于70詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；3. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并闡述我們應(yīng)該如何做，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力。題目中只給出了話題和一些提示詞，具體的寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，進(jìn)行補充，這是寫作中的一個難點。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。寫作時，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)提示詞，或聯(lián)想自己的實際生活，列舉身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，然后對創(chuàng)建文化城市提出自己的看法。審題可知，短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，第一人稱來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目提示，介紹了自己身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并對中學(xué)生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息，且敘述完整，內(nèi)容充實。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個部分：第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象；第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡單句為主，敘述清楚、簡潔。短文中的一些好的句型和短語有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。15．（黑龍江中考模擬）Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來越多，有的孩子很小的時候就戴上了眼鏡。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全國愛眼日”。請你結(jié)合實際生活寫一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時間讀書看報；②不要在太強或太弱的光線下看書；③堅持做眼保健操。要求：（1）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。2）要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。It’s important to protect our eyes___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知，本文說的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一和第二人稱英語作文一般是三段式第一段：開篇點題，交代寫作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，以及提建議第二段：文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時間讀書看報；②不要在太強或太弱的光線下看書；③堅持做眼保健操。第三部分：再次點題，并提出號召——現(xiàn)在開始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。16．（全國中考模擬）假如你是Ivy，你們學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動。請你根據(jù)所列提示問題談?wù)勀銓@個活動的認(rèn)識，用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿。提示問題：（1） Why do you show your kindness to others? （At least one reason）（2） What do you usually do when someone needs help? （At least two examples）（3） How do you feel?寫作要求：（1） 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2） 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； （3） 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（4） 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. 【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter es, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud wh