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cting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:It is our duty to……,I went to……,And I used to……,And I try to……,I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé),我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化,接下來介紹我過去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化,最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。13.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。請根據(jù)以下要點,給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件,介紹這次的活動。時間:5月30號活動內(nèi)容: 1. 給老師獻花致敬;2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上;3. 為老師表演節(jié)目(put on performances)你的感觸:……注意: 1. 詞數(shù)80100;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Our school will hold……,On the day we will……,We thank them for……,I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個感恩老師的活動,接下來介紹我們的活動內(nèi)容,最后表達我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。14.(山東中考模擬)書面表達有沒有那么一件事是你一直想做的,但又因為種種原因遲遲未付諸行動?也許是被擱置的新年愿望,或許是對父母的一句“我愛你”,抑或是一直沒有動身前往的地方?請將“It’s never too late to ...”補充完整,并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。詞數(shù):不少于100詞。要點:1. 寫一件讓你心心念念的事;2. 談?wù)勀阋恢毕胱鲞@件事,但沒能實現(xiàn)的原因;3. 談?wù)勀阆乱徊降挠媱?。注? ,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;、校名等相關(guān)信息?!敬鸢浮縄t’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority (首要任務(wù)) for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed (嘆息). “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,將“It’s never too late to ...”補充完整,并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般過去時,人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Molly and I used to……,She said that……,I didn’t do……,I talked to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想長大了去海南看美麗的風(fēng)景,接下來介紹我一直想做這件事,但沒能實現(xiàn)的原因,最后介紹我下一步的計劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。15.(四川中考模擬)書面表達目前,學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重,請圍繞以下要點談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€人建議。原因: 看法與建議:; ,學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮; 。 要求: 80100; ; ,不計入總字數(shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫作分析:本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開寫作,原因已經(jīng)給出來了,有以下幾點: 。寫完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議,具體內(nèi)容也已給出:;,學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮;。寫作內(nèi)容上難度不大,需要把更多精力放在語言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫作亮點:第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象,用到了一些較好的短語,如picked up a bad habit(養(yǎng)成了一個壞習(xí)慣)。第二段對原因進行了闡述,借助了first,second,third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來。一些短語運用準(zhǔn)確,如waste a lot of time playing games(浪費時間在玩游戲上),prepare for the exams(準(zhǔn)備考試)。最后一段闡明了自己的看法(In my opinion),句式上面有創(chuàng)新,用到了一處倒裝句(only in this way can we improve our study and make progress),強調(diào)了不能作弊,只有以誠實和勤奮的方式我們才能進步??傮w來說文章寫作較為流暢,有許多亮點。16.(南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬)書面表達同學(xué)們,中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了,班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計劃。假如你是李華,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學(xué)們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示:暑假計劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書;學(xué)習(xí)技能 (或自擬一點)生活健康飲食;堅持鍛煉 (或自擬一點)其它熱愛公益;親近自然 (或自擬一點)注意:1. 表達中必須包括所給要點,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________