【正文】 根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。14．（江蘇省運河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達。根據(jù)下列圖畫，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示詞：bucket n. 水桶，tap n. 水龍頭___________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A little boy saw an old woman carrying a bucket to fetch water. He rushed forward to help Grandma fetch water, but he was so short that he could not reach the tap. At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water. The little boy took the water to Grandma. Grandma was very grateful to the little boy. We should also learn from that little boy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等?！军c睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water給文章增色不少。15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容。提示詞：plate 盤子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆， color 給…上色， _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, Why not turn them into paintings? Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題和一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的應(yīng)用，使短文內(nèi)容表達豐富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。切忌堆砌詞語和句子，注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢。16．（廣東中考模擬）隨著社會的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠古時代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么？3. 你認為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱和姓名；2. 語意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?yōu)點：可以在任何時候購物；只需要一臺電腦和鼠標(biāo)；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價格，可以省錢；無論何時何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點：網(wǎng)上付款有時不安全；看不到實物，也不能試穿衣服。注意