【正文】 ___________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back onhistory and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I learn from your letter that……，I’m happy to……，The festival has a history of……，These two are……，we all love……，I hope that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表達了我很高興向你介紹端午節(jié)，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的歷史，日期，慶祝活動，特色食物和目的，最后表達我的感受。此處want to do sth, share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書面表達課外活動可以讓我們增長知識，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動等。最近，某中學(xué)生英文報開設(shè)了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動。；；。注意： 80 以上；、校名及地名；（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us。 Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in afteractivities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.【解析】這篇作文要求寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時候，謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。17．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過的家務(wù)活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務(wù)活和不喜歡做的家務(wù)活，并談?wù)勀阕黾覄?wù)的感受。提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，語意連貫，書寫工整；、校名等；，開頭給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。同時I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（山東中考模擬）書面表達在學(xué)習(xí)中, 不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容如下：1. 說明是否存在學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的現(xiàn)象；2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說明；3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應(yīng)的建議。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, _______________________________________________________________【答案】How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including puter games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask y