【正文】 ）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. ____________________________________________________________________【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu. In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public. How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達?，F(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗．請根據下列圖示，談談以下幾種職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻的．作為學生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點，并適當發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；語句通順，結構合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢，農民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學家怎樣做貢獻的。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻，接下來介紹農民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學家如何做貢獻的，最后表示我們作為學生應該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（全國中考模擬）現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網上購物，網購已成為流行趨勢，網購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。請根據下表所給的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。字數90字左右，開頭已給出，不計入總字數。優(yōu)點方便，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制；有很大的商品信息，可以買到當地沒有的商品；價格較便宜。缺點實物和圖片有差距,質量不保證；買貨容易退貨難；網絡支付不安全；你的觀點考生自擬（至少1點）提示詞：實物：material objectNow Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. 【答案】Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. It is convenient and you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. There are so many goods online that it is easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. Besides, the price is much lower.However, “ Every coin has two sides.” So does Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, sometimes it’s not easy to give them back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.In my opinion, Internet shopping is easy and fast but we should be more careful.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網上購物，網購已成為流行趨勢，網購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。要求用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點18．（北京中考模擬）作為初三畢業(yè)生，你們首次參加了“英語聽說機考”（the English Listening and Speaking Online Test）。你應邀為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經驗介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談談你對英語聽說機考有什么認識，在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語：necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題： What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning