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best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞,從我做起”主題教育活動(dòng),談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ挥⒄Z作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài),注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的;make great progress 取得巨大進(jìn)步15.(北京中考模擬)假 如 你 是 李 華 ,為 慶 祝 6月 5日 世 界 環(huán) 境 日 ,你 們 學(xué) 校 組 織 主 題 為 “我 們 的 地 球 我 們 的 家園 ( One Earth One Family)”的 志 愿 者 活 動(dòng) ?請 你 寫 一 封 電 子 郵 件 給 外 教 Peter,邀 請 他 來 參 加活 動(dòng) ?主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :活 動(dòng) 的 時(shí) 間 和 地 點(diǎn) ,你 們 準(zhǔn) 備 做 些 什 么 ,以 及 你 們 做 這 些 事 情 的 原 因 ?提 示 詞 語 :plant,recycle,speech,clean,beautiful提 示 問 題 :1. When and where will the activity be held?2. What will you do for it?3. Why will you do that?Dear Peter,I39。m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day. Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,I39。m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day.The celebration will be held in the Olympic Park at 2 pm on June 5.Our main activities will be planting trees and learning how to recycle. First,each student willbe given the chance to plant one tree. Planting trees helps keep the air clean and will also make ourcity more beautiful. Please prepare to get your hands dirty and dress accordingly. Our second activitywill be all about recycling. Our teacher,Mr. Parker will give us a speech about how to recycle andreuse in life at 4 pm. This will be a great opportunity to learn how to do it and e with an openmind.Environment Protection Day only es once a year,so I really hope you can attend ouractivities.Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours,Li Hua【解析】 假 如 你 是 李 華 ,為 慶 祝 6月 5日 世 界 環(huán) 境 日 ,你 們 學(xué) 校 組 織 主 題 為 “我 們 的 地 球 我 們 的 家園 ( One Earth One Family)”的 志 愿 者 活 動(dòng) ?請 你 寫 一 封 電 子 郵 件 給 外 教 Peter,邀 請 他 來 參 加活 動(dòng) ?主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :活 動(dòng) 的 時(shí) 間 和 地 點(diǎn) ,你 們 準(zhǔn) 備 做 些 什 么 ,以 及 你 們 做 這 些 事 情 的 原 因 ?動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般將來時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。 take part in參加; keep the air clean 保持空氣干凈16.(四川中考模擬) 書面表達(dá)在你的成長過程中,許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你,讓你感動(dòng)、伴你成長。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。要求: 1. 寫出要感謝的對象、原因及感激語言;,語意通順、連貫。,書寫工整、規(guī)范。、校名和地名。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意,完整,語法正確,合乎習(xí)慣,特別是句式,謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù),選用比較有把握的詞匯,用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài),注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料,要注意句子的完整性,謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式,句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文,要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。17.(廣東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。要求:?!敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文,要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片,弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情,用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?,并簡單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。因此寫作前,要仔細(xì)看圖片,了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情,并提煉出要點(diǎn),列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等,或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過分析可知,這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài),注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化,尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序,這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語表達(dá)和漢語的習(xí)慣不同,不能逐詞去翻譯,應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用簡單句的基本句型,如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息,表述準(zhǔn)確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述,條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主,謂語動(dòng)詞用了過去式,尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過去式的形式,如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語,如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ;再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ;After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。18.(山東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)。現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國,實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗.請根據(jù)下列圖示,談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的.作為學(xué)生,你又該怎么辦?要求:短文需包含提示要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名;語句通順,結(jié)構(gòu)合理,書寫規(guī)范;詞數(shù):80詞左右.短文開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream. 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream.In the fields,a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels.In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit,they are busy growing plants.Meanwhile,in hospitals,doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night.Besides,they also take good care of the old.(醫(yī)生)In our daily life,we can see many policemen in the streets on du