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最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。:?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ):like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí),形容詞放后面。高分句型:That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí),形容詞放后面等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.C解析:It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題,結(jié)合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。11.C解析:iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求,需要書(shū)寫一篇議論文,探討iPad進(jìn)課堂這一現(xiàn)象,以及人們對(duì)此的不同觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第三人稱。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出問(wèn)題現(xiàn)象,第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處,第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因,最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意多使用固定短語(yǔ),固定句型,使文章增色。點(diǎn)睛:對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式第一段:提出現(xiàn)象。第二段:SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat_______________________支持X的第一個(gè)原因。Theyalsoarguethat_____________________________支持X的另一個(gè)原因。第三段:However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat________________________反對(duì)X的第一個(gè)理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:________________一個(gè)例子。第四段:Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabovementionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一個(gè)壞處。12.B解析:We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式,注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí),連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。13.B解析:Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主,注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上