【正文】 些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．目前，許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據下表內容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。要點： 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習慣3. 時間花在電腦或網絡上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學?；蛲瑢W的建議……（至少一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右（開頭已給出的內容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2. 內容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略10．書面表達“Life is like a box of of never know what you are going to get next.”Forrest Gump 中文譯名：《阿甘正傳》“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名：《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追夢人）.”President Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們：生活是豐富多彩的，有快樂幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠方，便只顧風雨兼程。所以在學習和生活中，我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。請以Dream Chaser為題，談談你自己的觀點。要點提示：，并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實；，使自己不斷強大；，積極參加社會活動；。寫作要求：，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標，努力實現(xiàn)目標應做到勤奮學習，使自己不斷強大；正確面對困難，積極參加社會活動。：例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。