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清楚,語句通順,意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知,本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來,不要遺漏任何一個,書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明,談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點:短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由,結構清晰,要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確,書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ,理由也很充分??键c:提綱類作文。9.目前,許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內容寫一篇短文,對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。要點: 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習慣3. 時間花在電腦或網絡上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學?;蛲瑢W的建議……(至少一點)注意:1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右(開頭已給出的內容不記入總詞數(shù));2. 內容必須包括上表中的要點,可適當發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;3. 條理清楚、語句連貫;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略10.請根據(jù)表格內Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel(爭吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求:語言要通順,表達要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。文章開頭結尾已給出,不計入詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知,本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),第三人稱進行敘述,寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點,做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞?!玖咙c說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高興做某事;a lot of許多;get up起床等。本文中時間詞如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起來邏輯清楚,條理分明。在學習中,我們應注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點:考查提綱類作文