【正文】 下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間：5月30號(hào)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個(gè)感恩老師的活動(dòng)，接下來介紹我們的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，最后表達(dá)我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（云南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 提示：即將畢業(yè)了，在你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有什么想要對(duì)家長、老師或者朋友說？有歉意、有感謝，有懷念還是其它？請(qǐng)以 I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 為題，任選一位傾訴對(duì)象，用英語寫一篇文章，談一談你的想法。要求：、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；3. 請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上。寫在本試題卷上無效?！敬鸢浮縄’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is being better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”【解析】這是一篇要求介紹你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76. 連云港開展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營造一種“多讀書，讀好書”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形颉Ｗ⒁猓?. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我讀過的一本好書的名字，接下來介紹我讀這本書的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年5月18－19日，習(xí)近平總書記在全國生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)大會(huì)中，指出要加快構(gòu)建生態(tài)文明體系，要全面推動(dòng)綠色發(fā)展。作為一名鄂州籍的中學(xué)生，你的家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境怎么樣？發(fā)生了什么樣的變化？要推動(dòng)鄂州的綠色發(fā)展，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該做些什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上三個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫一篇80—100詞的作文，作文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的學(xué)校和個(gè)人姓名?！敬鸢浮緼s we all know, China has been developing extremely fast in different aspects of our life. There are also many places being more and more morden in Ezhou. Our hometown is one of those places which have changed a lot. The followings are the changes that I can show all of you .First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before,which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people. What39。s more ,more and more new buldings have been building to be used for trading with but not the least,people in our hometown are more helpful .They are all willing to help with each other and try their best to make the world more fortble to live in.What I think the most great change is the attitude that we hold .As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what39。s more，help with each other，live in，as long as等。而First of all, The roads in our