【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。8．（北京中考模擬）環(huán)境保護人人有責， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學牡丹開。”我們大多數(shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以One thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以One thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕洹⒎侵^語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（四川成都外國語學校中考模擬） Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it. Please write a position with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included: 1. How did you get the story?2. When and where did it happen? 3. What happened exactly?4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.【答案】請參考范文：The happy thing that I have ever experiencedThis is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep love.I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice , I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano I learned the piano from my teacher there.Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for advised my father to give my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn39。t give up. I was moved by my father39。s encourgement. 【解析】【詳解】本文是關于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話題的材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點來寫作。學生首先要認真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關信息,認真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:；,使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫；,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really f