【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（北京中考模擬）從下面兩個題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華，明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動，因此不能上英語課。請用英文給你們的外教John寫一張請假條，告訴他你要去干什么，為什么要參加這個活動以及你保證按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。提示詞語:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示問題:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?Why will you take this activity?How will you finish your homework?Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence from your English ______________________________________________________________Your loring student Li lHua題目②一位好老師，勝過萬卷書。在你的初中生活中，一定會有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Thank you, my teacher”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，讓更多的人認(rèn)識你的老師，同時(shí)表達(dá)你對他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括: 哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象，發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對他/她說些什么。提示詞語：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress提示問題：Which teacher impressed you most?What happened to make you impressed?What do you want to say to him/her?Thank you,my teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二：Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫一張請假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時(shí)間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個方面寫，這三個方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是以一般將來時(shí)為主。例文分成三段，根據(jù)提示問題，每段成一行，這種寫法條理清晰，分段明確。高分亮點(diǎn)：ask for；absence from；一般將來時(shí)；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題，文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師，第二段用一般過去時(shí)介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師，第三段表達(dá) “我”的感謝。分段明確，語句簡潔不啰嗦，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用合理。高分亮點(diǎn)：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；want to do sth。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是Jack，中學(xué)英文報(bào) WARM HEART專欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學(xué)在信中訴說了自己當(dāng)前焦慮的情緒，請根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫一封回信。寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表達(dá)你對他的理解并給予安慰。2. 求助人焦慮情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。（1）下周將要進(jìn)行期末考試。（2）盡管準(zhǔn)備了很長時(shí)間，對成績?nèi)詻]有把握。3. 為他如何消除考前焦慮提出具體建議并說明理由。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求：，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息。詞數(shù)：90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketb